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Meh

I understand this is your starting out phase and I honestly can't say much as I have non of My flash uploaded. Though I can say I have dabbled and I know that in a community with artists and talented musicians its really a point to make yourself stand out.

Now don't take this as me thinking your flash was total crap, in fact I laughed a little at the video as I have done mostly nothing but play Skyrim all week. No I think that you could try to either touch up on the art or maybe you really are good at art and you could make a really nice looking animation.

P.S. Don't use meme/rage faces they just come off as lazy.

onemanarmy675 responds:

Thanks!
It's really good to have someone give constructive criticism!
Yes I'm new at flash, and it's been a real pain trying to find good lessons for flash 8, so people need to bear with me here. I drew the rage faces, but I can see where you are coming from. Once again I'm glad you helped me out with your constructive criticism, it helps me learn from my mistakes, and hopefully avoid them in the future. Thanks for taking the time to review this.
Shoot me a message sometime.